Practice 5 – SW

Your Task
Imagine you are Jia Hui. Write an email to your roommate to encourage him to audition for the school band with you. You are to refer to the images and information on page 2 for your email.
In your email, include the following key information:
- Description of the school band and its activities
- Schedule of the rehearsals
- The tiered structure for the rehearsals based on ability
- Cognitive and cultural benefits of learning music in a band
- Positive effect of music on personal development and academics
- Steps to take for both you and your roommate to join the band
You may reorder the points. Remember to write in complete sentences.
Script:
School Band Auditions Symphonic Echoes, the school band - performances at school
events and competitions
Represent the school and engage in community bonding! Rehearsals: Tuesdays and
Thursdays, 4pm to 6pm.
Girl 1: Do you know about the school band? We perform in various events and it's a
wonderful chance to build our musical skills.
Boy 3: The school band? That sounds intriguing. What does it involve?
Girl 1: Well, we play a range of instruments and work together to create beautiful music. It’s
not just fun, but it's also intellectually stimulating. You learn to read music, improve your
coordination, and develop a sense of rhythm.
Boy 3: That sounds like a serious commitment.
Girl 1: It is, but we have different sections for all levels - from novice to expert. You start in a
place where you feel comfortable and gradually progress. It’s structured so that everyone
can grow at their own pace.
Girl 1: Being part of the band also cultivates discipline, teamwork, and can boost your
academic performance. Music has such broad benefits! Boy 3: What's the next step if I want
to join?
Girl 1: It’s straightforward - just fill out the interest form with your details, select your
preferred instrument, and come to the tryouts next Friday in the music room.
Boy 3: Thanks for explaining. I'll think about it and maybe I’ll see if my roommate is
interested too. How does he join? Girl 1: Just bring him along to the tryouts. We welcome
everyone interested in music.

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