Into the Wild: My Outdoor Adventure
Identify a word or phrase from the text which suggests the same idea as the words in bold.
(i) As I looked at the vibrant colours around me, I felt a sense of beauty in the natural world. [1 mark]
(ii) The sun began to set, and I felt a growing sense of fear as darkness approached. [1 mark]
(iii) The experience of hiking filled me with a sense of excitement and thrill. [1 mark]
(iv) As we reached the top, I felt a great sense of achievement wash over me. [1 mark]
PROMPT: I am a IGCSE student working on Comprehension. You are an English teacher. The text: {TEXT} Question 2a prompt: {QUESTION} My Answer 1 part (i) : {ANSWER1} My Answer 2 part (ii) : {ANSWER2} My Answer 3 part (iii) : {ANSWER3} My Answer 4 part (iv) : {ANSWER4} Suggested Answer: Suggested answer: "delicate beauty" (Paragraph 4)Suggested Answer: Suggested answer: "caution" (Paragraph 8)Suggested Answer: Suggested answer: "exhilaration" (Paragraph 8)Suggested Answer: Suggested answer: "sense of accomplishment" (Paragraph 9)
You are marking an English comprehension question. Evaluate if I have answered the question. Accept answers that are relevant, paraphrased and is the same meaning and logic of the suggested answers.
First check the total marks for all the parts in the question.
The suggested answers has various points. Each point is equal to one mark.
Check for ‘My Answer against the marking scheme: ‘Suggested Answer’. Do not add on to my answers.
Give me one mark and a green coloured tick symbol for each point that I am correct. Give me no marks and a red coloured cross symbol if i have missed out a point from the suggested answers.
If i am wrong, provide useful guidance but do not show me the suggested answers or the marking scheme.
If I am correct congratulate me.
At the end of your Output, provide me with the total marks for all questions using this format: ‘Total Marks: (marks)’
Use very simple language and be concise.
Using your own words, explain what the writer means by the words in bold:
After a few hours of hiking, we reached a clearing that opened up to a breathtaking view of the valley below. The landscape sprawled out like a painting, with rolling hills and a river glistening in the sunlight. "This is incredible!" I shouted, my voice echoing in the stillness. Liam grinned and pulled out his camera, eager to capture the moment. "Say cheese!" he called, and I struck a pose, feeling like a true adventurer.
(i) delicate [1 mark]
(ii) incredible [1 mark]
(iii) breathtaking [1 mark]
PROMPT: I am a IGCSE student working on Comprehension. You are an English teacher. The text: {TEXT} Question 2a prompt: {QUESTION} My Answer 1 part (i) : {ANSWER1} My Answer 2 part (ii) : {ANSWER2} My Answer 3 part (iii) : {ANSWER3} Suggested Answer: Suggested answer: fragile and beautiful
Suggested Answer: Suggested answer: amazing and surprising
Suggested Answer: Suggested answer: extremely beautiful and impressiveEvaluate if I answered the question correctly. Output a green tick if correct or a red cross if incorrect. Explain if I am correct or wrong, Do not give me the answer. Use Markdown
Use one example from the text below to explain how the writer conveys a sense of adventure. [3 Marks]
As we settled down for a quick snack, I reflected on why I had embarked on this journey. It wasn't just about the thrill of adventure; it was about pushing my limits and embracing the wild. "You know, I've always wanted to escape the routine of everyday life," I admitted. "Being out here makes me feel alive."
Liam nodded in agreement. "There's something about nature that inspires us. It's like we're part of something bigger." I couldn't have said it better myself. The freedom of the outdoors was intoxicating, and I felt a sense of belonging amidst the trees and the sky.
PROMPT: I am a IGCSE student working on Comprehension. You are an English teacher. The text: {TEXT} Question 2a prompt: {QUESTION} My Answer 1 : {ANSWER1} Suggested Answer: Suggested answer:
The phrase "pushing my limits" indicates the writer's desire to challenge themselves, which is a core aspect of adventure.
Expressing that "being out here makes me feel alive" suggests that the experience is invigorating and transformative, highlighting the thrill of the adventure.
Liam's comment about feeling part of "something bigger" illustrates the connection to nature, which adds depth to the sense of adventure by suggesting it is not just a physical journey, but also a spiritual one. (3 marks)Evaluate if I answered the question correctly. Output a green tick if correct or a red cross if incorrect. Explain if I am correct or wrong, Do not give me the answer. Use Markdown
Explain how the writer uses language to convey meaning and to create effect in the following paragraphs. Choose three examples of words or phrases from each paragraph to support your answer. Your choices should include the use of imagery. Write about 200 to 300 words. [15 Marks]
Paragraph 1: “As I stood at the edge…”
Paragraph 2: “We set off along the winding…”
PROMPT: I am a IGCSE student working on Comprehension. You are an English teacher. The text: {TEXT} Question 2a prompt: {QUESTION} My Answer 1 : {ANSWER1} Suggested Answer: Suggested answer:
The phrase "golden hue" in the first paragraph evokes a vivid image of the sunrise, suggesting warmth and beauty, which sets a positive tone for the adventure ahead.
The expression "my heart raced with excitement and a hint of anxiety" conveys the mixed feelings of eagerness and nervousness, allowing the reader to connect with the writer's emotional state as they embark on this journey.
The imagery of "rustling of leaves" and "distant call of birds" in the first paragraph creates an auditory picture of the forest, immersing the reader in the natural environment and enhancing the sense of adventure.
In the second paragraph, the phrase "winding path" suggests a journey that is not straightforward, implying that the adventure will have unexpected turns and challenges, which adds to the excitement.
The description of "towering trees that seemed to whisper secrets" personifies the trees, creating an enchanting atmosphere that invites the reader into a magical world, emphasizing the allure of nature.
The phrase "the air was crisp and filled with the scent of pine" uses sensory imagery to evoke a fresh and invigorating atmosphere, highlighting the refreshing experience of being in the wilderness.Evaluate if I answered the question correctly. Output a green tick if correct or a red cross if incorrect. Explain if I am correct or wrong, Do not give me the answer. Use Markdown
Question 3
You are giving a speech at your school assembly about the importance of outdoor adventures and the lessons learned from them. In your speech, you should:
- Highlight the excitement and anticipation of starting an outdoor adventure.
- Discuss the beauty of nature and its impact on personal growth.
- Reflect on the importance of friendship and teamwork during adventures.
Write the words of the speech.
Write about 250 to 300 words. (15 Marks)
PROMPT: I am a IGCSE student working on Comprehension. You are an English teacher. The text: {TEXT} Question 2a prompt: {QUESTION} My Answer 1 : {ANSWER1} Evaluate if I answered the question correctly. Output a green tick if correct or a red cross if incorrect. Explain if I am correct or wrong, Do not give me the answer. Use Markdown